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Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Wed 06, 2018 10:32 pm

Okay....Hi again everyone....Starting another new cover....This time its a new film not a show....I just started on this tonight....It shall be great hopefully  :)
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby wysmommy » Jun Thu 07, 2018 1:37 pm

It's a nice start. Have you tried placing the Title on top just to see what it looks like?
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Sat 09, 2018 1:47 am

wysmommy wrote:It's a nice start. Have you tried placing the Title on top just to see what it looks like?


Yup....That didn't suit it well
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Sat 09, 2018 1:49 am

Progressing..... :)
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby ctaulbee » Jun Sat 09, 2018 10:17 am

Not fond of the new update, the color does not work for me and the text around her head does not look good formatted like that.
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby alienmem » Jun Sat 09, 2018 11:07 am

Yeah
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby chouette » Jun Sat 09, 2018 1:00 pm

Agree with CT. Normally I would love the pink and purple, but not in this case. Keep at it. :)
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Sat 09, 2018 6:29 pm

Okay....Thanks guys....I am going too have it different next time....I already changed it some....These are just ideas for now....But too boost my thinking i'm taking a break and i'm watching my fav cartoon....The Fairly OddParents....Its still the best classic ever... I will start back on my cover tomorrow....As I didnt move away from my pc yesterday and was on PS all night long....Tomorrow will be my fresh start....But I really wanna know if Timmy Turner is Danny Phantom....Its been bugging me
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby chouette » Jun Sat 09, 2018 9:10 pm

Well, we would not like to deprive you of such suspense, lol
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Mon 11, 2018 11:17 pm

Will do the label tomorrow after work....For now its sleepy time :nerd  :zzzz
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby ericwh » Jun Tue 12, 2018 2:42 am

Couple of points

I think the spine title needs reducing

The universal logos on back and spine are distorted

Everthing is to close together let it btreathe
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby topmeasure » Jun Tue 12, 2018 4:12 am

I addition to what Eric has mentioned, the credits take up too much space INHO.
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Tue 12, 2018 7:23 am

Yeah....I wanted the logos too stretch the witdth and length of the space I have it set at but without overlapping anything....And it wont do that with the shift key gesture....But I will just fix them and fit it in regularly nice....And I will reduce my credits so they can breathe a bit....Thanks guys  :nerd

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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Tue 12, 2018 5:13 pm

I think she's ready to go now CT.....
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby ctaulbee » Jun Tue 12, 2018 5:31 pm

You should put a layer between the synopsis and that bg image, then use some dark color to brush over and hide the light spots, that right there is a prime example of why you are NOT suppose to put text on top of images as the image shows through and interferes with the reading of the text.
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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby Moviebugg88 » Jun Tue 12, 2018 6:15 pm

I got you....Just fixed it....Thanks  :) :-o  :-=



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Re: Breaking In (2018) (Feature Film)

Postby ctaulbee » Jun Tue 12, 2018 6:44 pm

That's much better :)
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