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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby topmeasure » Jan Mon 08, 2018 4:29 pm

Looks great Mat.
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby alienmem » Jan Mon 08, 2018 6:20 pm

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alienmem wrote:It's strange to see the cover split into two portions, and portions these, where are characters on the same side of the force.
Kylo Ren is the only one of the dark side so it seems like partitioning the cover in two seems strange. Why not center the characters? Also I think it looks too bright for a film that is so dark. Maybe not use white and use a darker color for the outer frame?


Also Rey is the central character in this trilogy so it seems strange she's not the center of the cover and in this particular film Rey, Kylo Ren and Luke are the essential characters. Maybe increase these in size and decrease all the other characters?

In my personal opinion the cover is too busy. There's a lot going on that doesn't warrant your immediate attention nd splitting the cover in 3 sections-left characters - center with space - right characters-doesn't help in my opinion

Techically it's very good. Nothing to point out


Hey, alienmem,
Thank you for a detailed description. I will try to explain.

I do not know if you've seen my previous covers for the Star Wars collection, but each one is made the same template. So left and right placed characters, and center action scene.

From the beginning my SW collection, I wanted the layout of the graphics to be different than on the covers or posters, which I could see to that moment.

In addition, I do not know if you have seen in my gallery that I add two versions to each part (a version with a bright background and a second version with a dark background), each of you can then choose if he prefers the first version or the second version. Placing the Character is a bit accidental.

I arrange them so that they fit all graphics. I also try to take into account your comments and tips that are very valuable to me and for which I thank you very much.

so, update :

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I just learned that it's part of an ongoing set of yours. Makes total sense then.

For the record I like strange things so looking forward to see this one.

My comments were not based on your precious matching set so they are totally out of context. i apolgyze

You got the skills...was just giving a suggestion on what I though was a stand alone piece.


Now on to the update. I like it a lot. I love the way you put the duel between Fin and the stormtropper commander in display facing each other smaller.

Looks great.
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby Matush » Jan Wed 10, 2018 2:02 pm

Update :

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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby ctaulbee » Jan Wed 10, 2018 2:13 pm

This is looking great my friend :D
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby stampe » Jan Wed 10, 2018 2:49 pm

Keeps getting better and better :)
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby alienmem » Jan Wed 10, 2018 4:04 pm

I think Fin's weapon is way too big. Looks bigger than him. Also I'd lose the chinese chick. Takes away from the duel going on between Fin and the other one
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby Sarge » Jan Thu 11, 2018 8:16 am

Now with the front side is done (We Hope), what surprises await us on the back.   :roll
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby sauron » Jan Thu 11, 2018 1:30 pm

Gets better and better with every update :)
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby topmeasure » Jan Thu 11, 2018 8:35 pm

Looks fantastic. :)
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby Matush » Jan Mon 15, 2018 4:36 pm

Thanks guys,

added some details and I think front is done for me... And if you have any suggestion then I will be grateful

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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby alienmem » Jan Mon 15, 2018 4:58 pm

Looks great. No suggestions I can think of.
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby ctaulbee » Jan Mon 15, 2018 5:53 pm

None here, I think it's a superb front :-$
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby chouette » Jan Mon 15, 2018 5:59 pm

Very nice! <3
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby sauron » Jan Mon 15, 2018 6:26 pm

Only suggestion is to move onto the back :p the front looks awesome.
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby chefjoe » Jan Mon 15, 2018 8:55 pm

Just...WOW! Great my friend!
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby shrike » Jan Tue 16, 2018 12:38 am

This will be another amazing addition to your awesome collection Matush :)
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby topmeasure » Jan Tue 16, 2018 3:04 am

A beauty. :)
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby Matush » Feb Tue 13, 2018 3:30 pm

Lately, I have not much time left, but I am trying to design something in the back.
I started with creating Rey and background in the back.

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What do you think about it?
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby ctaulbee » Feb Tue 13, 2018 3:41 pm

I like it a lot, you have mad skills in Photoshop my friend :-$
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby alienmem » Feb Tue 13, 2018 3:54 pm

I like her ass. Very fine ass. Very fine start to the back as well of course
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby VincentLupo » Feb Tue 13, 2018 4:22 pm

Looking good.
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby stardragon9 » Feb Tue 13, 2018 6:56 pm

I am jealous of your photoshop skills!  The photo for the back looks fantastic (and leagues better than anything the studio will put out on the official cover).  I can't wait to see the rest!
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby Matush » Feb Thu 15, 2018 1:40 pm

Thanks guys.
Fixed some details , I hope is better now.

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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby ctaulbee » Feb Thu 15, 2018 5:51 pm

Rocks look better now :D
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Re: Star Wars Collection

Postby Matush » Feb Sat 17, 2018 6:23 am

Another update for Ray, I hope better now.

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Try to add Luke skywalker (luke is poor quality for me). Looking another Luke, but here what I have for now:

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