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What do you think about this one?

Postby alienmem » Apr Fri 07, 2017 2:06 pm

Likey or no likey? Any suggestions?

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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby Bizkit » Apr Fri 07, 2017 2:35 pm

Like it. ;)
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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby Fogdude » Apr Fri 07, 2017 2:41 pm

Looks good!

Wanna do one for The Stewardesses (1969)? (That was NOT a request, BTW)


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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby alienmem » Apr Fri 07, 2017 3:57 pm

Fogdude wrote:Looks good!

Wanna do one for The Stewardesses (1969)? (That was NOT a request, BTW)


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What film is that? If it's a sleazy eurofest then I might!!!  :-W
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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby Fogdude » Apr Fri 07, 2017 5:01 pm

It is. I saw it in 1970 with some friends. It was in a sleazy little theater in downtown Salt Lake City. It was advertised as "XXX" but was re-rated as "R" a few years later. I saw it pop up in a list the other day & thought, "That can't be that crappy thing I saw decades ago?" But, sure enough, it was. Complete with tinny music & bad sound & camera work throughout. I think you'd love it.
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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby alienmem » Apr Fri 07, 2017 5:58 pm

I'll put it in my watchlist. Thanks for the suggestion
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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby VincentLupo » Apr Fri 07, 2017 8:33 pm

The blue to white on the title is bothering me.  There is nothing exactly wrong with it just looks off to me.  The "D" should have more white or if you want to keep the blue overlapping that much it should be the same on all the letters. Which means the "I" should not have the tip white and the "L" needs more blue on the bottom. The "M" would also need more blue on the bottom.  Just catches my eye that it isn't even.
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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby alienmem » Apr Sat 08, 2017 5:59 am

VincentLupo wrote:The blue to white on the title is bothering me.  There is nothing exactly wrong with it just looks off to me.  The "D" should have more white or if you want to keep the blue overlapping that much it should be the same on all the letters. Which means the "I" should not have the tip white and the "L" needs more blue on the bottom. The "M" would also need more blue on the bottom.  Just catches my eye that it isn't even.



Thanks. Actually I did nothing on the front. I just used an image of the retail I found on google. Maybe I'll change it one day but I already printed it out for myself... :D
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Re: What do you think about this one?

Postby bankska22 » Apr Sun 09, 2017 1:41 am

Very nice!
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