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The Searchers

Postby topmeasure » Feb Mon 06, 2017 8:23 am

Hello everyone,

My new project, ready for some constructive feedback. Thanks in advance.   :-)

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Re: The Searchers

Postby ctaulbee » Feb Mon 06, 2017 11:06 am

The synopsis needs to be smaller pt wise it's too crowded right now and the background behind it needs to be darker.

The legal area BG needs to be darker as well, like the dark brown in the shadows on the rocks on the front for example.

The rest looks fine
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Re: The Searchers

Postby topmeasure » Feb Mon 06, 2017 11:59 am

Update.

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Re: The Searchers

Postby ctaulbee » Feb Mon 06, 2017 12:30 pm

Legal is good, synopsis format is good but the synopsis back ground is still very light.

Why not make it dark brown?

You have none of that current green-yellow color anywhere else on the cover anyway.
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Re: The Searchers

Postby topmeasure » Feb Mon 06, 2017 3:14 pm

You right CT, thanks.
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