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by **topmeasure** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 10:32 am

Hello everyone,

A new take on a great flick, please let me know if I need to change anything. Appreciate all your tips and suggestions. :-)

Thanks,
Tamas

by **ctaulbee** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 11:17 am

Think the spine would be better if it featured colors like the front and back rather than being monochrome, other than that it looks good.

by **topmeasure** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 11:25 am

Thank you, I'll work on that. :-)

by **ctaulbee** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 11:57 am

Yup that's the ticket :-)

by **Fogdude** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 12:05 pm

Very nice, Tamas! Just wondering... why is the first line of the credit block left shifted? Are you saving that space for something to be added?
:-?

by **ctaulbee** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 12:10 pm

The whole credit block is left aligned, they do that on some posters.

by **topmeasure** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 12:25 pm

Fogdude wrote:Very nice, Tamas! Just wondering... why is the first line of the credit block left shifted? Are you saving that space for something to be added?
:-O

CT is right, I could shift the whole block to be centered, it does look a bit odd like that, Thank you guys for the encouragement. :-)

by **topmeasure** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 12:39 pm

Here we go, that should do it. What do you guys think? :-)

by **kylumi** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 12:45 pm

topmeasure wrote:
Fogdude wrote:Very nice, Tamas! Just wondering... why is the first line of the credit block left shifted? Are you saving that space for something to be added?
:-O

CT is right, I could shift the whole block to be centered, it does look a bit odd like that, Thank you guys for the encouragement.

Looks most excellent my friend. :-@

by **ctaulbee** » Dec Wed 07, 2016 12:50 pm

You have made it worse now, the top line is the only one centered and the leading has changed on it, looks very odd like that to me buddy.

If you are going to center it, then you need to center all the lines not just the one, otherwise it's better as it was.